Redefinition

Here are new variations of my Scott Pilgrim and Expendables reviews, edited and elaborated on. These are the versions that I published in the newspaper. They're a bit different from the original versions that I posted, crisper and more well-written but lacking in some of the humor. I humbly request that, if you're reading this, let me know which versions of the articles you like more in the comments section of this post... this will help me in the future.



Changes are sometimes necessary for newspaper-reader consumption because my vernacular is too hot for a lot of people to handle. However let it be known that while often ribald, I am still most gallant a paramour.

Also... yeah, the star rating got messed up on both of these reviews - both got slightly over-rated in the paper from my initial assessments due to the paper's star system. There's a contradictory line in the SPVTW review (that isn't my fault) as a result, but I can't change it since the paper was published already.

Scott Pilgrim Vs. The World

The Expendables